Dear Dmitri,
 
Thank you for your comments and kind words on my notes. I may not have been able to explain them exactly, but I was not trespassing on the birth places of these texts. I just tried to suggest parallelisms between TT and "Lance"--that the adventures of the protagonist could be read as those of some knight in a medieval romance and that the text could be seen as a kind of chart.
 
I had read in Brian's *VNAY* that VN's first impulse for "Lance" was your passion for mountain climbing and that the story derived from your parents' fears for your safety (207) and that HP was invented inverting you: "Dmitri was a passionate mountain climber and an accomplished skier" (589). I think the fall theme in TT might be also from your parents' fears of your falling or sliding down while mountaineering.
 
Best wishes,
Akiko
  
Akiko, 11.20: My I correct something in your excellent notes about which I have first-hand knowledge? In "Lance," the deliberate mountaineering terms "crossing through a notch between two stars" and "attempting a traverse on a cliff face so sheer and with such delicate holds" are a giveaway that, while the story may be read on more than one level, including the medieval, its inspiration was the anguish and the empathy my parents experienced when I began climbing seriously and would depart, sometimes alone, sometimes into uncharted territory.