From Jeff Edmunds <jhe2@psulias.psu.edu>:
For me the comparison of tongue to hot boiled strawberry is more tactile
than visual, despite the similarities in size, color, and, as Jansy
demonstrates with the image she sent to the list, shape. After all, in
kissing, neither party sharing the tongue can see it, but both are keenly
aware of its texture.
Footnote 10 of an ancient article on _Korol', dama, valet_ (KDV) and
_King Queen Knave_ (KQK) reads:
The strawberry/tongue relationship may have bled into the English version
of KDV from _Ada_, which Nabokov was composing at the same time he was
revising KQK. In Chapter 17, Van and Ada are exchanging sloppy kisses:
"'I can lend you my tongue,' she said, and did. A large boiled
strawberry, still very hot."
The passage in the text of the article that refers to this footnote,
which claims that "In more than one instance VN's revamping of _KDV_
seems overdone," cites as one example: "the simple and
evocative 'frukt' whose lack at the station's sandwich stall Dreier
bemoans [in the Russian version] is transformed into the absurdly
overwrought 'nice, plump, lumpy, glossy red strawberries positively
crying to be bitten into, all their achenes proclaiming their affinity
with one's own tongue's papillae."
This passage of _KQK_ suggests to me that the origin and aptness of
Nabokov's tongue/hot boiled strawberry metaphor is more tactile than
visual, but of course as Jansy rightly points out, visually the metaphor
works deftly.
At 11:00 PM 8/11/2005, you wrote:
----- Original Message -----
From: Jansy Berndt de Souza
Mello
To: don barton johnson
Sent: Thursday, August 11, 2005 6:26 PM
Subject: a curious image
Dear Don,
Besides synesthesia, VN´s imagetic precision is
astounding by the way he condensed different informations.
I had always thought that the image of Ada´s tongue as hot and soft like
a strawbery was sufficiently precise:
"‘I can lend you my tongue,’ she said, and did.A large boiled
strawberry, still very hot. He sucked it in as far as it would go. He
held her close and lapped her palate. Their chins got thoroughly
wet".
I had not thought that visually the
tongue would also look very much like a strawberry! Today I found a
picture in a magazine that amazed me and I thought that you might be
interested in sharing it with me... Jansy