There’s one misprint — not that it matters much:/ Mountain, not fountain. The majestic touch."//Life Everlasting — based on a misprint!"
(see appended images from the Mont Blanc mountain and of the fountain pen)
Charles Kinbote reproduces a mountain-variant: "Between the mountain and the eye/The spirit of the distance draws/ A veil of blue amorous gauze/ The very texture of the sky./A breeze reaches the pines, and I/ Join in the general applause...."
For the first time today the verses "join in the general applause" reminded me of another poet's (or so I thought) famous lines. While I googled after them, I came to two interesting quotes, by Samuel Johnson (and a majestic touch!) and Soren Kirkegaard.
I'm inclined to think that, if VN was signalling to someone else, he must have had S.J in mind. However, I couldn't resist the temptation to include SK's.
(1)
"The lives of the English poets: and a criticism of their works" (1781) by
Samuel Johnson: " But in the most general applause discordant voices will always
be heard. It has been objected by some, who wish to be numbered among the sons
of learning, that Pope's version of Homer is not Homerical; that it
exhibits no resemblance of the original and characteristick manner of the Father
of Poetry, as it wants his awful simplicity, his artless grandeur, his
unaffected majesty."
(2) "A fire broke out backstage in a theatre. The clown
came out to warn the public; they thought it was a joke and applauded. He
repeated it; the acclaim was even greater. I think that's just how the
world will come to an end: to general applause from wits who believe it's a
joke."
Søren Kierkegaard, Either/Or, Part I