Vladimir Nabokov

NABOKV-L post 0013821, Tue, 31 Oct 2006 08:45:19 -0800

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Re: Amusement park and fair copy RESPOBSE
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Dear Sergey,
Whoops! My apologies for not giving the citation explaining the amusement
park. It is in the Commentary to lines 609-614: "At first I was greatly
bothered
by the blare of diabolical radio music from what I thought was some kind of
amusement park across the road — it turned out to be camping tourists — and I
was thinking of moving to another place, when they forestalled me."

As for your second query re the passage "Frank has acknowledged the safe
return of the galleys I had been sent here and has asked me to mention in my
Preface — and this I willingly do — that I alone am responsible for any
mistakes
in my commentary. Insert before a professional. A professional proofreader has
carefully rechecked the printed text of the poem against the photo type of the
manuscript, and has found a few trivial misprints I had missed"

My assumption:
Since K has corrected the galleys indicating where to insert the requested
statement of personal responsibility, I assume the editor made the inserted
disclaimer, but neglected to delete the placement instruction. Believe me, it
happens --to the anguish of the author and amusement of the reader. VN tinkers
with the "meta-" device 2-3 times in ADA.

Best, Don
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Quoting NABOKV-L <NABOKV-L@HOLYCROSS.EDU>:

> [EDNOTE. This post, submitted earlier by Sergei Soloviev, was held
> up for delivery over the weekend. Sorry about that -- SES]
>
> I do not see any quoted passage below that would explain the
> presence of the phrase about "loud amusement park" in the Foreword.
> I used the expression "Fair Copy" exactly because it is used by Kinbote to
> explain the state of manuscript of "Pale Fire". I asked
> whether the text of the Foreword itself can be considered
> as a "Fair Copy". (I.e., ready to be sent to editor.)
> Of course it is possible to derive
> that the "loud amusement park"
> is supposed to be where Kinbote is writing the commentary
> (Cedarn, Utana...), but the phrases about this amusement
> park should not be included in a normal Foreword. So, they
> were not "edited out". It is also difficult to believe that
> they existed only in imagination of somebody, but a delusional
> person may not "edit them out" if they were on paper.
>
> Best,
>
> Sergei
>
>
> Le Vendredi 27 Octobre 2006 18:57, vous avez écrit :
>> Dear Sergey,
>> I'm not sure what you mean by "keys" but "the loud amusement park is
>> explained in the quoted passage below. As for the "Fair Copy" business, do
>> you have the poem manuscript or the Commentary in mind? If the poem --- all
>> the poem
>> is "Fair Copy" except for the final stanzas since S. did not live long
>> enough to
>> correct them.
>>
>> Best, Don Johnson
>>
>> Quoting NABOKV-L <NABOKV-L@HOLYCROSS.EDU>:
>> > Dear List,
>> >
>> > I already asked this question, but in the end of another posting and in
>> > less detail.
>> >
>> > Several phrases in the Kinbote's Foreword seem to indicate that
>> > a)it existed on paper b) it is not a "Fair Copy":
>> >
>> > "... I alone am responsible for any mistakes in my commentary. INSERT
>> > BEFORE A PROFESSIONAL. A professional proofreader has carefully
>> > rechecked..." (p.17 of Penguin Classics edition, 2000)
>> >
>> > "... There is a very loud amusement park right in front of my present
>> > lodgings." (p.11, ibid.)
>> >
>> > " ... not like the shaky little affair on which my typewriter is
>> > precariously enthroned now, in this wretched motor lodge, with that
>> > carrousel inside and outside my head, miles away from New Wye." (p.25)
>> >
>> > What, do you think, we should make of these "keys"?
>> >
>> > Best,
>> >
>> > Sergei Soloviev
>
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