On the morning after the Night of the Burning Barn (when Van and Ada make love for the first time) Ada tells Van that she has to finish a translation for Mlle Larivière (Lucette’s governess):
After she too had finished breakfasting, he waylaid her, gorged with sweet butter, on the landing. They had one moment to plan things, it was all, historically speaking, at the dawn of the novel which was still in the hands of parsonage ladies and French academicians, so such moments were precious. She stood scratching one raised knee. They agreed to go for a walk before lunch and find a secluded place. She had to finish a translation for Mlle Larivière. She showed him her draft. François Coppée? Yes.
Their fall is gentle. The woodchopper
Can tell, before they reach the mud,
The oak tree by its leaf of copper,
The maple by its leaf of blood.
‘Leur chute est lente,’ said Van, ‘on peut les suivre du regard en reconnaissant — that paraphrastic touch of "chopper" and "mud" is, of course, pure Lowden (minor poet and translator, 1815-1895). Betraying the first half of the stanza to save the second is rather like that Russian nobleman who chucked his coachman to the wolves, and then fell out of his sleigh.’
‘I think you are very cruel and stupid,’ said Ada. ‘This is not meant to be a work of art or a brilliant parody. It is the ransom exacted by a demented governess from a poor overworked schoolgirl. Wait for me in the Baguenaudier Bower,’ she added. ‘I’ll be down in exactly sixty-three minutes.’ (1.20)
Darkbloom ('Notes to Ada'): leur chute etc.: their fall is slow... one can follow them with one’s eyes, recognizing —
Lowden: a portmanteau name combining two contemporary bards.
baguenaudier: French name of bladder senna.
Ada translates into English the second quatrain of François Coppée's sonnet Matin d'Octobre ("October Morning," 1874):
C’est l’heure exquise et matinale
Que rougit un soleil soudain.
A travers la brume automnale
Tombent les feuilles du jardin.
Leur chute est lente. On peut les suivre
Du regard en reconnaissant
Le chêne à sa feuille de cuivre,
L’érable à sa feuille de sang.
Les dernières, les plus rouillées,
Tombent des branches dépouillées :
Mais ce n’est pas l’hiver encor.
Une blonde lumière arrose
La nature, et, dans l’air tout rose,
On croirait qu’il neige de l’or.
It's the exquisite and early hour
Which a sudden sun blushes.
Through the autumn mist
The leaves of the garden are falling.
Their fall is slow. Or can follow them
With a gaze recognizing
The oak with its copper leaf,
The maple with its leaf of blood.
The last, the most rusty,
Fall from the stripped branches:
But it's not winter yet.
A light blonde sprinkles
Nature, and, in the rosy air,
You would think it was snowing gold.
Before the family dinner in “Ardis the Second” Van recites a different English version (probably composed by Van himself) of the same four lines by Coppée:
‘Old storytelling devices,’ said Van, ‘may be parodied only by very great and inhuman artists, but only close relatives can be forgiven for paraphrasing illustrious poems. Let me preface the effort of a cousin — anybody’s cousin — by a snatch of Pushkin, for the sake of rhyme —’
‘For the snake of rhyme!’ cried Ada. ‘A paraphrase, even my paraphrase, is like the corruption of "snakeroot" into "snagrel" — all that remains of a delicate little birthwort.’
‘Which is amply sufficient,’ said Demon, ‘for my little needs, and those of my little friends.’
‘So here goes,’ continued Van (ignoring what he felt was an indecent allusion, since the unfortunate plant used to be considered by the ancient inhabitants of the Ladore region not so much as a remedy for the bite of a reptile, as the token of a very young woman’s easy delivery; but no matter). ‘By chance preserved has been the poem. In fact, I have it. Here it is: Leur chute est lente and one can know ‘em...’
‘Oh, I know ‘em,’ interrupted Demon:
‘Leur chute est lente. On peut les suivre
Du regard en reconnaissant
Le chêne à sa feuille de cuivre
L’érable à sa feuille de sang
‘Grand stuff!’
‘Yes, that was Coppée and now comes the cousin,’ said Van, and he recited:
‘Their fall is gentle. The leavesdropper
Can follow each of them and know
The oak tree by its leaf of copper,
The maple by its blood-red glow.’
‘Pah!’ uttered the versionist.
‘Not at all!’ cried Demon. ‘That "leavesdropper" is a splendid trouvaille, girl.’ He pulled the girl to him, she landing on the arm of his Klubsessel, and he glued himself with thick moist lips to her hot red ear through the rich black strands. Van felt a shiver of delight. (1.38)
Darkbloom ('Notes to Ada'): By chance preserved:
The verses are by chance preserved
I have them, here they are:
(Eugene Onegin, Six: XXI: 1-2)
Klubsessel: Germ., easy chair.
In Drugie berega ("Other Shores," 1954), the Russian version of his autobiography Speak, Memory (1951), VN tells about his French governess and mentions the verses of Lamartine and Coppée (Mademoiselle's favorite poets):
Природа постаралась ее наградить всем тем, что обостряет уязвимость. К концу ее пребывания у нас она стала глохнуть. За столом, случалось, мы с братом замечали, как две крупных слезы сползают по ее большим щекам. «Ничего, не обращайте внимания», – говорила она и продолжала есть, пока слезы не затопляли ее; тогда, с ужасным всхлипом, она вставала и чуть ли не ощупью выбиралась из столовой. Добивались очень постепенно пустячной причины ее горя: она, например, все более убеждалась, что если общий разговор временами и велся по-французски, то делалось это по сговору ради дьявольской забавы – не давать ей направлять и украшать беседу. Бедняжка так торопилась влиться в понятную ей речь до возвращения разговора в русский хаос, что неизменно попадала впросак. «А как поживает ваш парламент, Monsieur Nabokoff?» – бодро выпаливала она, хотя уж много лет прошло со времени Первой Думы. А не то ей покажется, что разговор коснулся музыки, и многозначительно она преподносила: «Помилуйте, и в тишине есть мелодия! Однажды, в дикой альпийской долине, я – вы не поверите, но это факт – слышала тишину». Невольным следствием таких реплик – особливо когда слабеющий слух подводил ее, и она отвечала на мнимый вопрос – была мучительная пауза, а вовсе не вспышка блестящей, легкой causerie. Между тем сам по себе ее французский язык был так обаятелен! Неужто нельзя было забыть поверхностность ее образования, плоскость суждений, озлобленность нрава, когда эта жемчужная речь журчала и переливалась, столь же лишенная истинной мысли и поэзии, как стишки ее любимцев Ламартина и Коппе! Настоящей французской литературе я приобщился не через нее, а через рано открытые мною книги в отцовской библиотеке; тем не менее хочу подчеркнуть, сколь многим обязан я ей, сколь возбудительно и плодотворно действовали на меня прозрачные звуки ее языка, подобного сверканью тех кристаллических солей, кои прописываются для очищения крови. Потому-то так грустно думать теперь, как страдала она, зная, что никем не ценится соловьиный голос, исходящий из ее слоновьего тела. Она зажилась у нас, все надеясь, что чудом превратится в некую grande précieuse, царящую в золоченой гостиной и блеском ума чарующую поэтов, вельмож, путешественников. (Chapter Five, 7)
Alphonse de Lamartine (1790-1869) is the author of La Chute d’un Ange ("The Fall of an Angel," 1838), an epic poem in Récit (Narrative), Fifteen Visions and Epilogue, set in Lebanon. Its Récit begins as follows:
« Vieux Liban ! » s’écria le céleste vieillard
En s’essuyant les yeux que voilait un brouillard,
Pendant que le vaisseau courant à pleines voiles
Faisait glisser nos mâts d’étoiles en étoiles,
Et qu’à l’ombre des caps du Liban sur la mer
L’harmonieuse proue enflait le flot amer.
In March 1905 Demon Veen (Van's and Ada's father) perishes in a mysterious airplane disaster above the Pacific. Describing Demon's death, Van mentions a maussade Lebanese beauty of fifteen sultry summers:
Idly, one March morning, 1905, on the terrace of Villa Armina, where he sat on a rug, surrounded by four or five lazy nudes, like a sultan, Van opened an American daily paper published in Nice. In the fourth or fifth worst airplane disaster of the young century, a gigantic flying machine had inexplicably disintegrated at fifteen thousand feet above the Pacific between Lisiansky and Laysanov Islands in the Gavaille region. A list of ‘leading figures’ dead in the explosion comprised the advertising manager of a department store, the acting foreman in the sheet-metal division of a facsimile corporation, a recording firm executive, the senior partner of a law firm, an architect with heavy aviation background (a first misprint here, impossible to straighten out), the vice president of an insurance corporation, another vice president, this time of a board of adjustment whatever that might be —
‘I’m hongree,’ said a maussade Lebanese beauty of fifteen sultry summers.
‘Use bell,’ said Van, continuing in a state of odd fascination to go through the compilation of labeled lives:
— the president of a wholesale liquor-distributing firm, the manager of a turbine equipment company, a pencil manufacturer, two professors of philosophy, two newspaper reporters (with nothing more to report), the assistant controller of a wholesome liquor distribution bank (misprinted and misplaced), the assistant controller of a trust company, a president, the secretary of a printing agency —
The names of those big shots, as well as those of some eighty other men, women, and silent children who perished in blue air, were being withheld until all relatives had been reached; but the tabulatory preview of commonplace abstractions had been thought to be too imposing not to be given at once as an appetizer; and only on the following morning did Van learn that a bank president lost in the closing garble was his father.
The lost shafts of every man’s destiny remain scattered all around him,’ etc. (Reflections in Sidra). (3.7)
Van does not realize that his father died, because Ada (who could not pardon Demon his forcing Van to give her up) managed to persuade the pilot to destroy his machine in midair. In her letter to Van (written in February 1905, a month before Demon's death) Ada (now married to Andrey Vinelander) mentions Van's essay Reflections in Sidra:
He greeted the dawn of a placid and prosperous century (more than half of which Ada and I have now seen) with the beginning of his second philosophic fable, a ‘denunciation of space’ (never to be completed, but forming in rear vision, a preface to his Texture of Time). Part of that treatise, a rather mannered affair, but nasty and sound, appeared in the first issue (January, 1904) of a now famous American monthly, The Artisan, and a comment on the excerpt is preserved in one of the tragically formal letters (all destroyed save this one) that his sister sent him by public post now and then. Somehow, after the interchange occasioned by Lucette’s death such nonclandestine correspondence had been established with the tacit sanction of Demon:
And o’er the summits of the Tacit
He, banned from Paradise, flew on:
Beneath him, like a brilliant’s facet,
Mount Peck with snows eternal shone.
It would seem indeed that continued ignorance of each other’s existence might have looked more suspicious than the following sort of note:
Agavia Ranch
February 5, 1905
I have just read Reflections in Sidra, by Ivan Veen, and I regard it as a grand piece, dear Professor. The ‘lost shafts of destiny’ and other poetical touches reminded me of the two or three times you had tea and muffins at our place in the country about twenty years ago. I was, you remember (presumptuous phrase!), a petite fille modèle practicing archery near a vase and a parapet and you were a shy schoolboy (with whom, as my mother guessed, I may have been a wee bit in love!), who dutifully picked up the arrows I lost in the lost shrubbery of the lost castle of poor Lucette’s and happy, happy Adette’s childhood, now a ‘Home for Blind Blacks’ — both my mother and L., I’m sure, would have backed Dasha’s advice to turn it over to her Sect. Dasha, my sister-in-law (you must meet her soon, yes, yes, yes, she’s dreamy and lovely, and lots more intelligent than I), who showed me your piece, asks me to add she hopes to ‘renew’ your acquaintance — maybe in Switzerland, at the Bellevue in Mont Roux, in October. I think you once met pretty Miss ‘Kim’ Blackrent, well, that’s exactly dear Dasha’s type. She is very good at perceiving and pursuing originality and all kinds of studies which I can’t even name! She finished Chose (where she read History — our Lucette used to call it ‘Sale Histoire,’ so sad and funny!). For her you’re le beau ténébreux, because once upon a time, once upon libellula wings, not long before my marriage, she attended — I mean at that time, I’m stuck in my ‘turnstyle’ — one of your public lectures on dreams, after which she went up to you with her latest little nightmare all typed out and neatly clipped together, and you scowled darkly and refused to take it. Well, she’s been after Uncle Dementiy to have him admonish le beau ténébreux to come to Mont Roux Bellevue Hotel, in October, around the seventeenth, I guess, and he only laughs and says it’s up to Dashenka and me to arrange matters.
So ‘congs’ again, dear Ivan! You are, we both think, a marvelous, inimitable artist who should also ‘only laugh,’ if cretinic critics, especially lower-upper-middle-class Englishmen, accuse his turnstyle of being ‘coy’ and ‘arch,’ much as an American farmer finds the parson ‘peculiar’ because he knows Greek.
P.S.
Dushevno klanyayus’ (‘am souledly bowing’, an incorrect and vulgar construction evoking the image of a ‘bowing soul’) nashemu zaochno dorogomu professoru (‘to our "unsight-unseen" dear professor’), o kotorom mnogo slïshal (about whom have heard much) ot dobrago Dementiya Dedalovicha i sestritsï (from good Demon and my sister).
S uvazheniem (with respect),
Andrey Vaynlender (3.7)
Darkbloom ('Notes to Ada'): And o’er the summits of the Tacit etc.: parody of four lines in Lermontov’s The Demon (see also p.115).
le beau ténébreux: wrapt in Byronic gloom.
An anagram of Ardis (Daniel Veen's family estate where Van spends two summers and where his life-long romance with Ada begins), Sidra (the Gulf of Sidra) is a body of water in the Mediterranean Sea on the northern coast of Libya, named after the oil port of Sidra or the city of Sirte. Van wrote Reflections in Sidra after his journey to the East:
He traveled, he studied, he taught.
He contemplated the pyramids of Ladorah (visited mainly because of its name) under a full moon that silvered the sands inlaid with pointed black shadows. He went shooting with the British Governor of Armenia, and his niece, on Lake Van. From a hotel balcony in Sidra his attention was drawn by the manager to the wake of an orange sunset that turned the ripples of a lavender sea into goldfish scales and was well worth the price of enduring the quaintness of the small striped rooms he shared with his secretary, young Lady Scramble. On another terrace, overlooking another fabled bay, Eberthella Brown, the local Shah’s pet dancer (a naive little thing who thought ‘baptism of desire’ meant something sexual), spilled her morning coffee upon noticing a six-inch-long caterpillar, with fox-furred segments, qui rampait, was tramping, along the balustrade and curled up in a swoon when picked up by Van — who for hours, after removing the beautiful animal to a bush, kept gloomily plucking itchy bright hairs out of his fingertips with the girl’s tweezers. (3.1)
Lamartine is the author of Voyage en Orient (1832-33), a travel journal written during the author's visit to several Middle Eastern regions now known as Turkey, Lebanon, Israel and Syria.
The local Shah mentioned by Van brings to mind shakh, the Russian word for "check" (in chess and similar games, check is a condition that occurs when a player's king is under threat of capture on the opponent's next turn). On a chess board there are sixty-four squares. After the breakfast on the morning following the Night of the Burning Barn Ada tells Van that she will be down in exactly sixty-three minutes. 63 + 1 = 64.