Annotations by Alexey Sklyarenko

According to Kinbote (in VN's novel Pale Fire, 1962, Shade’s mad commentator who imagines that he is Charles the Beloved, the last self-exiled king of Zembla), he writes his Commentary, Index and Foreword to Shade's poem in a desolate log cabin in Cedarn, Utana:

These lines are represented in the drafts by a variant reading

39 ........... and home would haste my thieves

40The sun with stolen ice, the moon with leaves

According to Kinbote (in VN’s novel Pale Fire, 1962, Shade’s mad commentator who imagines that he is Charles the Beloved, the last self-exiled king of Zembla), his landlord, Judge Goldsworth, resembles a Medusa-locked hag:

In his Commentary and Index to Shade's poem Kinbote (in VN’s novel Pale Fire, 1962, Shade’s mad commentator who imagines that he is Charles the Beloved, the last self-exiled king of Zembla) mentions Embla town and Emblem bay:

Embla, a small old town with a wooden church surrounded by sphagnum bogs at the saddest, loneliest, northmost point of the misty peninsula, 149, 433. (Index)

In an unused variant quoted by Kinbote (in VN’s novel Pale Fire, 1962, Shade’s mad commentator who imagines that he is Charles the Beloved, the last self-exiled king of Zembla) Shade mentions events, strange happenings, that strike the mind as emblematic:

Describing the family dinner in "Ardis the Second," Van Veen (the narrator and main character in VN’s novel Ada, 1969) mentions Dr Stella Ospenko’s ospedale:

Describing the torments of poor mad Aqua (the twin sister of Van's, Ada's and Lucette's mother Marina) Van Veen (the narrator and main character in VN’s novel Ada, 1969) mentions the Arlington harridan:

Describing the young Prince's cohabitation with Fleur de Fyler (the younger daughter of Countess de Fyler, Queen Blenda’s lady-in-waiting), Kinbote (in VN’s novel Pale Fire, 1962, Shade’s mad commentator who imagines that he is Charles the Beloved, the last self-exiled king of Zembla) mentions two ancient flutes, both sad-tuned and feeble, and a broken viola d'amore that Fleur de Fyler kept trying to mend:

Describing the Shadows (a regicidal organization), Kinbote (in VN’s novel Pale Fire, 1962, Shade’s mad commentator who imagines that he is Charles the Beloved, the last self-exiled king of Zembla) mentions a copy of a French newspaper with the headline: L'EX-ROI DE ZEMBLA EST-IL À PARIS?:

Describing his first road trip with Lolita across the USA, Humbert Humbert (the narrator and main character in VN's novel Lolita, 1955) mentions Lolita's bi-iliac garland still as brief as a lad’s:

Describing the death of Queen Blenda (the mother of Charles the Beloved), Kinbote (in VN’s novel Pale Fire, 1962, Shade’s mad commentator who imagines that he is Charles the Beloved, the last self-exiled king of Zembla) mentions the drunk who started to sing a ribald ballad about "Karlie-Garlie:"